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Sky Shade Eyes by ~darlingdeath:icondarlingdeath:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Song


Can you keep the dark away
that haunts my mind every day?
Can you see into my eyes;
taste all of your filthy lies?

I wish you would break my heart,
I've been waiting from the start..
Rip apart what you have sown,
stab the needle to the bone.

Dry the stains upon your skin,
swear once more to let me in.
Wind sweeps quiet through your hair,
turn my back, I shouldn't care.

Sky shade eyes, I can't let go,
I wish I could let you go.
I wish I could let you go.
Could let you go.

Minutes left until the end.
I wish I could let you go.
Seconds fail to pretend
I could let you go.
©2006-2009 ~darlingdeath
:icondarlingdeath:

Author's Comments

Ja. I was listening to Nine Inch Nails, when I wrote this... But its all mine. =P

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:iconfallingbelow:
~fallingbelow Oct 11, 2006, 9:02:44 AM
Wow, this is good. I love the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd stanzas.

--
"I hold only good intensions,
I try only for the sake of love,
And I fear only the worst."

In the Mind of a Worrywart
:iconravenstarangel:
~ravenstarangel Oct 11, 2006, 1:21:27 PM
you have a maturity beyond your years and unfortunately, you are confined by your age (actual years on earth). you must be terribly frustrated and bitter, at those who are closest to you. They, who don't understand, and to whom you can't express what you need. They who hold the keys to your cage.

as i'm sure you know, you are more than you seem. but... you will have to wait for the fullness of your time. make this waiting count for something!!!
:blowkiss:
:icondarlingdeath:
~darlingdeath Oct 11, 2006, 3:35:40 PM
Many thanks!

--
Heaven knows where I'll end up - but it's a safe bet that I'll never be at the top of anything! Nor do I particularly care to be. -H. P. Lovecraft
:icondarlingdeath:
~darlingdeath Oct 11, 2006, 3:36:13 PM
:blush: Thank you. I shall.

--
Heaven knows where I'll end up - but it's a safe bet that I'll never be at the top of anything! Nor do I particularly care to be. -H. P. Lovecraft
:icondarlingdeath:
~darlingdeath Oct 11, 2006, 3:36:42 PM
Many thanks, Noctis Peregrinus. :)

--
Heaven knows where I'll end up - but it's a safe bet that I'll never be at the top of anything! Nor do I particularly care to be. -H. P. Lovecraft
:iconfallingbelow:
~fallingbelow Oct 11, 2006, 4:12:40 PM
Np.

--
"I hold only good intensions,
I try only for the sake of love,
And I fear only the worst."

In the Mind of a Worrywart
:iconmemyselfillinois:
Mood: Mesmerized ~memyselfillinois Oct 13, 2006, 7:53:27 PM
Wow, this is so good. You have so much talent. It's amazing. Keep up the wonderful work.

--
“We were reckless in the way that we lived and cautious in the way we survived.”
:icondarlingdeath:
~darlingdeath Oct 15, 2006, 4:01:55 PM
Thank you so much!

--
Heaven knows where I'll end up - but it's a safe bet that I'll never be at the top of anything! Nor do I particularly care to be. -H. P. Lovecraft
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